Revised...

...and with a big part chopped off for now. This part will be added again later, when I'm done revising and whatnot. I'll tell you a secret: I've almost finished the first chapter! Yes, it seems like just a little, but one of the chapters are quite long (more than the usual 12 page chapter). I'll put it up later, and by later I don't mean half a year later like I did now. I promise I won't pull any tricks on you this time.